An interactive style of writing will help you gain readers, but steer clear of SMS lingo if you want to be taken seriously.
Focus on good content, not on monetization. Over time, money and benefits will follow good content.
Add your personality - If you are writing on a particular topic, there are a number of people who will be writing on the same topic. So you need to add that specialty to your blog to make it look different and to allow your readers to take away something that the others are not offering.